Monday, February 17, 2014

Weekend News Special

Today we had to write about 2 exciting things from our weekend.

We always have to start with a brainstorm to get our ideas flowing.
Ms Loo's brainstorm
Then we helped Ms Loo create her first draft, this is what we came up with,
Ms Loo's first draft so far by 4LOJ
Girls came up some sentences starters to help us:
Guess what I did in my weekend, I... (Emma)
You won't believe what I did in the weekend, I... (Emma)
Let me tell you about my weekend, I... (Grace)
Do you know what I did in my unbelievable weekend, I... (Vishakha)
How was your weekend? This is mine, I... (Imogen)
Look what I did in my weekend, I... (Dyna)
I think you ought to know about my weekend, I... (Aimee)


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